Balance can be associated with gymnastics, scales, scorecards, life, health, walking, wheel alignments, your bank statement, and many other things. How can you implement it in your writing? Why is it important?
Step 1: Balance helps to establish a sense of progression.
Step 1: Balance helps to establish a sense of progression.
Select a scene toward the beginning of your manuscript
and another one either in the middle or near the end. What has happened to the characters in the
interim? An example would be one in
which the opening chapter features a castle in a state of disrepair since your
fantasy aristocracy has fallen upon hard times.
In Chapter 12, francium has been discovered by the Cofferer in the northwest quadrant of the bailey.
https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=what%20is%20francium
Eurkea overnight, the cast is dressed to the nines, royal dainties are served non-stop, and the mules have been replaced with million dollar thoroughbreds. Using this basic narrative, what is the net effect of the progression? Is it positive or negative? What writing techniques have you used to achieve this outcome?
In one of my prior blog posts, I touched on the flow of writing. Some aspects mentioned therein could be joined with balance. Here is the link:
http://sheilassagaciousstirrings.blogspot.com/2016/05/writing-techniques-flow.html
https://www.google.com/webhp?sourceid=chrome-instant&ion=1&espv=2&ie=UTF-8#q=what%20is%20francium
Eurkea overnight, the cast is dressed to the nines, royal dainties are served non-stop, and the mules have been replaced with million dollar thoroughbreds. Using this basic narrative, what is the net effect of the progression? Is it positive or negative? What writing techniques have you used to achieve this outcome?
In one of my prior blog posts, I touched on the flow of writing. Some aspects mentioned therein could be joined with balance. Here is the link:
http://sheilassagaciousstirrings.blogspot.com/2016/05/writing-techniques-flow.html
Step 2: Progression achieved through balance reinforces
theme.
If you’ve predetermined that your particular project is
theme based, balance will be of utmost importance to you. Careful construction will prevent overuse of
your theme or such scant use the reader is unable to discern it in the first
place. For instance, if your basic theme
is forgiveness, there are a plethora of ways to weave this into your writing to
achieve an even distribution of it. Does
your project include a theme?
Step 3: Dodge the ditches.
Have you ever ditched
something? In Step 1, we touched on the characters, but what about
the plot? If your story stays balanced,
this will help prevent it from getting off in the barrow pit which may cause a reader to ditch it as well. Let’s say you have a scene where an employee
is about to be terminated by a well known corporation whose headquarters are on
the top floor of a swank high rise commercial building.
If you devote four pages to explain every step of the soon to be ex-employee leaving his apartment, getting into his car, driving to the meeting, attempting to parallel park on the street; one line where the boss tells him he's fired, and five subsequent pages describing his exit from the building, it could be that some of your enthusiasts will quit turning the pages. They'll be looking for File 13 or headed to the closest thrift shop to add to their annual non-cash charitable contributions.
If you devote four pages to explain every step of the soon to be ex-employee leaving his apartment, getting into his car, driving to the meeting, attempting to parallel park on the street; one line where the boss tells him he's fired, and five subsequent pages describing his exit from the building, it could be that some of your enthusiasts will quit turning the pages. They'll be looking for File 13 or headed to the closest thrift shop to add to their annual non-cash charitable contributions.
Step 4: Pick and
practice your act.
A gymnast needs a balance beam to practice his skill. During the summer months of my brother’s
collegiate gymnastics career, he fashioned a set of still rings between two
tall cottonwood trees in our yard. Use
what is readily available to you. Most
writers have other books or movies in their homes or apartments. Select one of your favorites from there or your local library. Repetitive reading or watching can assist you
with being able to spot where your fellow author or the filmmaker completed his
balancing act. How would you rate his act along with your own?
Step 5: The Greek Team.
After you’ve done the best you can with your manuscript,
dial up your alpha and omega team.
Instruct your alpha or beta readers to make notations concerning balance
as they work their way through the pages.
Your omega team member, i.e., your editor, will definitely appreciate your balancing
efforts. The ones who will benefit the
most are your readers because you will have put your work in a steady position
or framework so that it does not fall.
As we continue to practice our craft, we can achieve spectacular results. Speaking of spectacular, check out this stellar image relating to balance which is located in our great state.
South of Buhl in the
Salmon Falls Creek Canyon stands the famous Balanced Rock. Over 48 feet tall
and 40 tons, the wind-carved rock balances precariously on a pedestal only 3
feet by 17 inches. Nearby Balanced Rock Park is an excellent spot for a picnic.
https://visitidaho.org/things-to-do/natural-attractions/balanced-rock-balanced-rock-park/
Fellow authors would benefit from reading your comments regarding how you have managed to apply balance in your writing. Thank you for your participation. The rising tide benefits all ships!
Watch for my next blog post regarding additional
writing techniques.
In the interim, stay balanced, and write well!
